Yeah, wrap the shoulder harnesses as noted. Fix the 360 degree weld on the main hoop spreader plate as you noted.
I'd send photos to Nick & Jay & the boys on the rear supports. They *might* buy of on it as-is. It looks pretty well done. Or they may suggest a simpler alternative to make it passable, maybe some gussetting or something that wouldn't be as extensive as replacing the whole rear support bar or adding an extension. (which would need approval, itself... that piece is supposed to be of one continuous tube)
Check SCCA's cage specs to see what their minimum spec is for 1.5" tubing on that car.
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